Monday, September 12, 2016
Practicing Incorporating a Quotation
Overall Glory was a good movie. I enjoyed watching the movie as it described how the 54th regiment came to be and the heroic actions they took in battle. During the movie there was an important moment where the black men who were "free" were going to be paid less than the average white soldier. As one film critic said "The “pay crisis” is depicted in that wonderful scene." It was very important when Shaw too tore up his voucher to depict that he has grown closer to the men in his regiment regardless of their color and who he was growing to become.
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You did a good job of using the quote to prove that Shaw was close to his soldiers, but you could have used a shorter quote to prove this. Also the quote needs to be credited to who said it and put it in quotation marks.
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